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A Nice TubaChristmas Review

Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 12:07 am
by Art Hovey
My daughter chose not to be a musician, but writes well. She attended the TubaChristmas last month in Brattleboro, Vermont. According to the web it was conducted by Steve Damon. I would like him to have a copy of her piece, but he does not seem to have an email address. Here is what she wrote:

http://www.box.net/shared/ddze44vb7z

Re: A Nice TubaChristmas Review

Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 12:24 am
by Tundratubast
Art, That, indeed was beautifully written. A very fine communicator you've got there. Congrats.

Re: A Nice TubaChristmas Review

Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:09 am
by David Richoux
Very nice -

If you take the role as parent/editor, you might ask her to look up the definition of "Penultimate," which might lead some slight revisions of the penultimate paragraph, but on the whole it is very well written!