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Personal Website Feedback

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:18 am
by Kingofspadesx200
Hey guys, I just had to create a website for a music technologies class and could really use some feedback. So please do me a favor and check it out, http://arparrish.webs.com/" target="_blank thanks so much.

Re: Personal Website Feedback

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:41 am
by Kingofspadesx200
why thank you :D

Re: Personal Website Feedback

Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:56 pm
by MikeW
Your muted text/background color contrast is a pleasant change from most web sites.

Disclaimer: The fact that I like it may be bad news; I often find myself in the minority in matters of taste.

Re: Personal Website Feedback

Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:10 pm
by Big Francis
It looks like the bio of an athlete that a school would put up (meaning I think it looks too generic, especially for a first page). Consider deleting your "Basic Information" section (unless it's required) and adding your school and a link to the music department on your page too. IMHO, putting your age on the page, especially if you're under 20, could be detrimental depending on your audience. There are too many young idiots out there that reflect badly on you. The photos you've posted do a better job of conveying who you are and what you're about than your "Basic Information" does.

That's just my two cents. Don't read too much into it.
Frank